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Tigerstar's Death - 2013

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WELP It's now 7:23 and as soon as I woke up this afternoon around 1:45, I went to get ramen noodles and continued on this. Last night I sketched it and finished inking it, so here it is.

I can't draw backgrounds. If you haven't noticed.
Those bushes are crap. and so are those trees.
Freakin' love how everything else came out though <3 I added Firestar's figure in the top right corner. Which also looks like crap.

However, the song "Noots" by Sum 41 kept me goingggg it's such a good song (u,w,u/)

I absolutely love how Scourge came out. DEM EYES~

Anyways, please critique. Haven't gotten one from anyone in a while and I'd love to improve <3

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Scourge, Tigerstar, Firestar & Warriors (c) Erin Hunter
Art (c) *xXjamiedemonfoxXx
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Hnnnnng first critique let's try this. HONESTLY I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT I'M DOING SO I'M STARTING ON YOU.

Vision: The image overall looks great, but there are some parts that are a little harder to see from how dark they are. Maybe it's just how I'm sitting.

Originality: The angle of the image is very original. I've seen a lot of pictures of Tigerstar's death, but I've never seen one from this angle. The scene isn't one that is extremely original, being that there are thousands of pictures from Tigerstar's death. But it was a major event in the book, which does make sense why a lot of people would draw it.

Technique: WOMAN, YOU'RE ART IS FANTABULOUS HOW COULD YOUR TECHNIQUE NOT BE GREAT? The only thing about it, is Tigerstar's claws are a bit long. But I do understand that is your style. Just remember that he is just a cat though c: You can definitely tell how Scourge was moving just moments before, and the way you make the blood splatter just adds more of an effect that makes it look even better.The eyes, oh god I love the way you draw eyes eue I always love how it looks like there's an entire galaxy in the character's eyes.

Impact: There is so much emotion in this picture OuO Your drawingss always have that "A picture says a thousand words" effect. You can see the whole scene just from how this is drawn.

On the whole image, I personally would rate it a 5 out of 5, but then again, that's just me.

So yep. I hope this is okay for a first critique VwV